Sten Mark III

[eddie500]

Hi all heres my latest work a Sten Mark III edition tell me what you think

Regards,

Eddie

:afro:

 

[crabcakes66]

looks decent.


Edit: yeah what sidewinder said.

 

[SidewinderX]

may we have a larger, closer render? it looks fine, but it's be nice to see more details.

 

[eddie500]

here is a closer look:

 

[eddie500]

here is a wireframe. polycount: 1,400 i haven't optimized it yet :naughty:

 

[SidewinderX]

I haven't looked a refgrence for this gun... but isn't there a pistol grip?

And how did you do the holes? boolean?

 

[Stormy]

look like a goood start..

but looks like there are a few errors on the model .. wount be to hard to fix.. mayb try deleting a few pollys aroudn there and working into it abit. and mayb have a few more sides on the frount there

 

[Submerge]

i sent u a PM

 

[eddie500]

Found the web site

no sidewinder the Mark III does not have a handle, thx for all the crit guys i will make some improvments and will post up again later :afro:

 

[eddie500]

done another render this 1 looks much better :afro:

 

[The Dark Elf]

done another render this 1 looks much better :afro:

Just looks black on my screen now ;(

 

[eddie500]

yea it is kinda black.. lol sry i thought it looked better been playing round with the advanced lighting/render settings :dork:

 

[IchI]

tbh the 2nd picture just looked as small as the first and the wireframe was even smaller. I use a high res but still. are u rendering your guns in 540x480 ? apart from something that I can hardly see it looks alright. I still don't get whats going on with the handle part and trigger.... how are u suposed to shot it....

 

[eddie500]

a.) its rendered in 800x600.....
b.) look at a pic of a Sten Mark 3 and u will see its the exact same

 

[tim8604]

a.) its rendered in 800x600.....

Then why not frame it up better and give us the 800 x 600 instead of the 640 x 460 .

This is just an example, but by rotating your camera to include as little white space as possible, you maximize the amount of detail we will be able to see. Same goes for that wire frame. Looks cool, I want to see the wire frame before I can say much more though.

This picture is the same size as the ones you uploaded. I scaled/rotated the gun to give you an example of how to fit the space better. Good luck.

 

[eddie500]

here we go then, thx for the advice tim

 

[Argyll]

That's the Sten Mk. II

Cocking handle needs to be longer (I think someone mentioned this).

Also, I do not believe that the magazines have depressions in them. Reference here, and here:

Can't those holes be skinned (if this model will be skinned)?

 

[eddie500]

hmmm yes that looks like my ref pic but mine said Mark 3 :-/ and yes the holes could be skined...