Stigmata
The Freeman
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Your posing is a lot better, and the shot warping seems to be gone. It looks much, much nicer. I actually laughed out loud at the Spy one (#035). Aside from the stretched frames, spotty posing, and some bad flow, I can say I didn't really expect it to be a Spy joke. And if I had, I would not have expected the Heavy to be lowering him over the Demo with a rope.
If all your jokes were like that or better, then I'd definitely read your comic. Just try to stay away from generic fill-in-the-blank jokes (see: #036, most of your comics), and if you can't, then change the punchline (see: #035, well done).
If all your jokes were like that or better, then I'd definitely read your comic. Just try to stay away from generic fill-in-the-blank jokes (see: #036, most of your comics), and if you can't, then change the punchline (see: #035, well done).
