Homework/m16

[mikeandike22]

instead of doing my homework tonight i worked on this

Tri count=2597

 

[IchI]

You really should have done your homework

 

[mikeandike22]

You really should have done your homework

does that mean the model isnt good.

 

[JudasKing]

welp since u seem like a guy that doesn't take criticism/suggestions to heart... in a nutshell, it looks very primitive tbh :/ also might wanna keep proporitions in mind, ie. the butt looks a bit too tall, reciever looks kinda short, etc. just my .02 though.

 

[mikeandike22]

thank you, i dont know if it is actually the model or just the perspective of the render but ill work on it. and i was trying to be rude to ichi i just wanted to know the meaning of his comment, and if he thought it was bad wat about it was bad.

 

[Afterburn3r]

I think it's good, not enough small details, but it's a very good start

 

[$kelet0r]

the stock is far too big methinks
add more detail to the barrel especially and the handle(cross hatch grip)

 

[Mikademius]

Homework is important... You did not do enough homework on the rifle though. I guess you have one side reference and 5-10 others with views of some details... Dig up more reference.

 

[JudasKing]

.. are u telling him to model the texture of the grip on the handle? (i don't mean texture as in 2d)

 

[Mikademius]

.. are u telling him to model the texture of the grip on the handle? (i don't mean texture as in 2d)

Was that aimed at me?

 

[JudasKing]

no sorry,u posted right b4 i did, i meant john

 

[Quak_66]

yeah. the butt's too tall, but other than that, not bad actually. Skin it.

 

[Mikademius]

ah......

 

[$kelet0r]

sorry i meant the details on the handle like finger grooves ans the slightly raised box where the crosshatch is on the handle
a guy i know adds every little detail on the model and then puts a plain black skin over it and it looks incredible - very skilled guy

 

[mikeandike22]

post a render it sounds 1337.

 

[JudasKing]

ah ic thot u meant to actually model the crosshatch also, that's a looot of polies for something with that level of detail (or lack of)