Gordon's Brother
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man,this is the best Half life fan fic i have EVER read :naughty:
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I agreeGordon's Brother said:man,this is the best Half life fan fic i have EVER read :naughty:
Gordon's Brother said:This would be an awsome story for a mod
BetaMaster said:I've made some changes. At this point in time, Chapter Seven will NOT be the final chapter! The story will continue on to Chapter Eight, and then end.
I like the way I want it to end now, which is good.
I also failed two quizzes in Algebra II this week, which is not good.
Just wanted to show I'm still alive.
Peace!
TrippyG said:omg 2 much txt :dozey:
Ok.rocklegendfm99 said:you've been delaying the last chapter for a long time just to piss people off.
quit blaming the chapter 7 delays on school
if you failed two quizzes in algebra II, you were not spending all your time studying, you frickin liar.
quite a personallity I must say, you are quite the writer from what I could read in a half an hour, which is a lot, it led to many wonders to know that you have been writing for such a long time.BetaMaster said:Hi there! I'm not dead!
Haha, no, I'm not a professional writer. I've been writing stories since 5th grade, however. It's always been a hobby. I'm still working on the next chapter, but exams are next week, and I've got a really big project in English I've had to work on (Essay on The Count of Monte Cristo), so the chapter will once again be delayed. If you think about it, the delays are kind of ironic. It's a fanfic in the Half-Life world, and....well, you all know about the constant Half-Life 2 delays, haha. Anways, if you want, I'll post what I have written of this chapter (It'll end as a cliffhanger, but that way you'll have something to read!).
Comments?
I see a struggle of description, but as a close fan of Half Life I can understand why...Gordon's Brother said:end it like with the gman saying (Gman)"goodbye Mr.freeman this is Your stop."(Gordon)What the heck?"
The dark fades away and he is back where the gman first took over his body and nobady even sees what happened.(Gman echo)"That,Mr.Freeman was just a preview of things to come[maniacal laughter]
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hows that,weird probably, lol
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in hl3 you will probably figure out the gman's real name.
Thank you for your comment! :thumbs:lurajoonami said:quite a personallity I must say, you are quite the writer from what I could read in a half an hour, which is a lot, it led to many wonders to know that you have been writing for such a long time.
I have also shared my peices of writing on a community, but not like you, you leave everyone in suspense waiting for another chapter. I want to let you know that you have my support, whether or not I have a high post rank or not if that's what apeals to you about community members opinions, I give you the handshake of aproval on this story so far (in what I've read).
I also have a story I would like to share about Half Life 2, the plot inspires me to think of such ideas as the Combine in the situation of trying to control the race "humans" in the struggle of humanity's evolution. I believe I will write a story that will take place in Half Life 2, and I think I will post it once it is finished or even in it's progress because of the massive amount of the specific story layout.
I will continue to read your story once the time is provided in my schedule.
sincerely,
Lurajoonami
bvasgm said:0|-| y3@h ch@p73r 7 pwn5 w00t!!1
Sieg said:Damn,my eyes hurt like hell from reading that story,from the first chapter to the last......God I feel like hell.